Saturday, May 3, 2014

Blog Entry #9: Research



  • General Subject:
    • My general subject for my research project is  Sanitation in Slaughterhouses
  • Focus or Narrowed Topic:
    • How clean these slaughterhouses are kept to the point where diseases can't survive and spread
  • Plan to Argue or Support for?
    • The managers at the slaughterhouses should take extra time to assure that the slaughterhouses are kept extra clean to risk diseases from spreading to the meat and eventually affecting people and potentially killing them
  • Sources looked at and how will they be useful:
    • I haven't looked at any sources as yet
  • Next Steps if the topic is approved:
    • Next steps in the writing and research process:
    • Research using approved databases
    • Highlight and quote the useful information that can support my argument
    • Use an outline to plan the writing process
    • Pre-write by creating a draft
  • Difficulties in moving forward in the researching process:
    • The topic might lead to stray to other concerns
    • My argument might be a little broad   

    5 comments:

    1. i think your topic is very interesting because we are doing similar topics. i think you should look into your topic more great job!

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    2. Another good idea about slaughter houses and it is definitely something to write about because slaughterhouses are gross. this might be of some help http://www.hfa.org/slaughterhouse.html

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    3. Interesting topic, I'm kind of curious myself onto what goes on in those slaughterhouses. I don't think your topic is too broad. It's specific enough. Good Luck!

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    4. I think your topic is good. Your argument doesn't seem broad, in fact it's very specific. And you picked a topic that you should be able to find a lot of information on.

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    5. Sanitation in Slaughterhouses is an interesting topic to talk about. Its definitely a problem to talk about

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